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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you take this somewhere new because I've read at least ten stories that start off exactly like this. Your writing is decent but I am definitely not impressed with the lack of originality in the plot-line so far. Please prove me wrong and make this a good one, I rather enjoyed some of your other work.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maaaybeee.. Ok yeah soon enough thanks for the new chapter it is sad and thought provoking.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok i didnt mean to be that quick. And that was a LONG LONG CHAPPIE. Anyway, i really like your twist on Kagome turning into a Full Demon, i seriously thought she would just turn into a half demon. Boy was i wrong. Ok I might have missed a bits in there but not to worry i offen rereead if i think i have.