rate_review Reviews

Please finish this good story.

i like this story. your writing draws the reader into what, at first, appears to be a simple story. you subtly work in other twists and turns, and before the reader knows what you've done, we are reading a wonderfully complex story.

i do believe sesshoumaru is acting a little ooc. i don't think either brother would have accepted being forced to be that close.but artistic license allows that for the developement of the story.

thank you for a wonderful story. i can't wait to see how they manage to get along, throughout the long winter, and with the quirky personalities that you have added with your oc's.

ok

Wow great job we love how you're building the plot. sorry this isn't gonna be a gushy review i'm doing this on a break at work

Affie

it getting very good. keep it up.

Interesting story... Af is looking foreward to reading more and I'm curious to see what you're going to do with the "cursed items" hope to read more of your work soon

Rysha and Affie

Lol yeah I'd say this story takes place a little out of the way from Inuyasha's everyday life. Good job developing the characters.

D_

different. up-date soon

lol, I'm excited to see how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's sharing a room turns out! XD Good job! Looking forward to an update!


-DM

that was funny and good cant wait for next part