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well,I cannot see where you will go with this story, it seems so complete, execpt perhaps if you add the chapter with rin, but otherwise, there needs to be a major twist in this story to continue, otherwise the idea behind this story is quite good and the situation clearly has a humorous side, so good work all in all. keep it up

I really think you should move this story to either General or Inuyasha/Kagome section.

You have it in Sesshoumaru/Kagome section but yet the story is of Inuyasha and Kagome. Do you see the problem there?

this belongs in the "general" section, you should move it.

*eyebrow at above commenter* Who died and made you lord and lady of aff.net???

That was interesting and it was a good read... ^_^ Good work.