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for Heir to the West

by Narniafreek07

schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here go some name for you:

Girls:
Aiko- loved one
Amaya- night rain
Kaida- little dragon
Kimi- she who is without equal
Kioko- meets world with happiness
Leiko- arrogant
Miyo- beautiful child
Nami- wave

Boys:
Akio- bright boy
Hiroshi- generous
Kaemon- joyful
Keiji- leads cautiously
Makoto- sincere, honest
Ryu- dragon

Unisex:
Tomi- rich
Seiko- force, truth
Sanyu- happiness
Satu- fairytale
Saku- remembrance of the lord
Ren- arranger
Nori- belief
Natsu- born in summer
Mitsu- light

Hope these helped! =^_^= Ja!
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person snowbird
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! The lemon was delicious! After she discovered she was pregnant, I had to laugh when he told her that during her pregnancy she would probably be horny. haha. I hope so and also hope she wants him with her to sooth the pups when they begin to kick and act up. So she's having a litter which only makes sense as I stated in a previous review. I still had to laugh though as I imagined the expression on her face when he told her. I admired her for behaving herself and not embarrasing herself and Sesshoumaru at the party before and during the wedding of Rin and hers. I was glad she followed the 'rules' of an intended and later the mate. I know at times she didn't like having to act so docile and submissive but in the end she was a true 'lady'. I admired her for that. There is a time and place for defiance. I'm still waiting to learn if she now shares his lifespan.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good to see your still writing on this story. I like the story line. I normaly never do this, but I just though I would make one little suggestion. Sometimes there is not enough indication the the 'point of view' has changed, it makes it a little difficult to keep up with who's perspective the reader is supposed to be following.
But good job so far. Keep it up.
Legilmyth
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
again another great chapter. Hmm names...Kyo of course Ai and umm well good question.
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Chapters! I loved them both. You are doing amazingly with your story keep up the great work and i cant wait fro the next chapters. Since i dont know like how many girls or boy you are haveing here are two links to a site with a list of japanese girl names and their meaneings and japanese boys and their meanings.

http://www.20000-names.com/female_japanese_names.htm

http://www.20000-names.com/male_japanese_names.htm
person starlit333
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You lost a reader once you mentioned the Twilight series.
person paulymoon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey great job, I like your writing, and I love the story so far. Continue whit this fantastic job.
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow 6 dang i bet she is going to be huge lol.... plz update soon =)
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapters!! BRAVO!! Now I wonder...is Kagome going to have a human 9 month pregnancy or a shorter one like dogs do?

Just curious!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ja =^_^=

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