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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the story but older brother is aniki. not anikia.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this twist Inuyasha getting the upper hand. It was great reading I do hope you continue.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It sucks.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I suppose what bothers me the most about this fic is the sudden domination. I mean, it's good, in essence, but Inuyasha just came into his new powers, and it's slightly odd that he can use those new powers so efficiently so soon. However, I understand the reason for this is so Inuyasha tops Sesshomaru, which makes sense.
Oh, also- these are the correct spellings and meanings (or "corrector", I guess o.o):
"Aniki", "niisan" both mean big brother; "ototo" or "otouto" means young or little brother; "youkai" is demon; "youki" is demon power; "ningen" means human. And I think that's most of the Japanese phrases that you used that were incorrect. Other than that, good job ^^
-DM
Oh, also- these are the correct spellings and meanings (or "corrector", I guess o.o):
"Aniki", "niisan" both mean big brother; "ototo" or "otouto" means young or little brother; "youkai" is demon; "youki" is demon power; "ningen" means human. And I think that's most of the Japanese phrases that you used that were incorrect. Other than that, good job ^^
-DM
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it don't suck.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.