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for The Heart Within

by YoukaiFate

person MeLaiya
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this, please keep up the good work but would you be so kind as to not change Sango's name...its kind of a turn off. NEhoo, loving the rest, please update soon.
person MeLaiya
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this , please keep up the good work and update soon
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story right now! I mean, in just two chapters you have grabbed my attention and made me fall in love, lol :D There is nothing wrong about this story at ALL!!! ITS MAGNIFICANT!!! I cannot wait for more :D
person MeLaiya
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaah I am so loving this. Please you have got to update a.s.a.p.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I don't know how to express the greatness that you have going here. I was unsure at first cause I'm not huge on Sango based fics (don't get me wrong, I love her character, I'm just not very good at characterizing her as of yet) and I was floored at the story you have started here. I can't wait to see what else happens now, and I definitely need to watch some Chapter Black Saga of YYH so I can see what all happened with Sensui. Your writing style is crisp, cool, and vivid, with a hint of being to-the-point, that makes it very enjoyable to follow. Update when you can. This is an amazing start so far. :D
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is, (which I am sure you have heard me say), ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! Its just so great! I mean, W.O.W! You're such an amazingly talented writter there....can't wait for more chapters :D

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