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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, ok. I meant to give you a real review earlier but it was late and I wasn't thinking straight. So here it is.
This story is masterfully thought out. I love how you've transferred the character names (Jokotsu, Ayame) into western equivalents. I especially love how you described Sesshomaru's clothes so that they are still similar to his original costume yet have that Native American flare. I also love how you've managed to add a little bit of Cheyenne/Lakota folklore into the mix. Both Tsukiko and I look forward to the next chapter and if you have ANY questions about Japanese language/culture, we're here for you.
This story is masterfully thought out. I love how you've transferred the character names (Jokotsu, Ayame) into western equivalents. I especially love how you described Sesshomaru's clothes so that they are still similar to his original costume yet have that Native American flare. I also love how you've managed to add a little bit of Cheyenne/Lakota folklore into the mix. Both Tsukiko and I look forward to the next chapter and if you have ANY questions about Japanese language/culture, we're here for you.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story very much, I hope you update it soon.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't give up on this story. Its wonderfully written and always seems to have me hooked. I've read and re-read it so many times... I'm more than looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be out soon. Keep up the great work.
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one powerful story. I love the detail you use to weave your tale. The research you have done for this story lends the credibility that makes this story all the more real. I look forward to reading more of this story.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! While I am sad that it took you so long for this chapter, I am also glad becasue it was great... just like the last one, it left me eagerly wanting the next one. So... hurry up, damn it. :)