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September 28, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read all of your chapters, but I'm constantly
destracted by the characters. Sesshomaru is completely
out of character. I can't truly believe or connect
with the story due to this reason. Also, I would
suggest elaborating on actions, scenery, and the characters
other than dialouge. The story line is a good one.
I think you can make it work with a little editting.
destracted by the characters. Sesshomaru is completely
out of character. I can't truly believe or connect
with the story due to this reason. Also, I would
suggest elaborating on actions, scenery, and the characters
other than dialouge. The story line is a good one.
I think you can make it work with a little editting.