rate_review Reviews

Please don't stop, I can see that this has such a wonderful plot!

It's interesting. Naraku is pulling the same thing with Inu sort of like he did with Kohaku. I liked it :-)

i loved this chapter. the intensity of inuyasha's confusion was incredible. the imagery of the visions that naraku gave inuyasha was marvelously done. i could feel the conflicting emotions that were going through him, paralyzing his actions. this is an amazing start to what looks to be a great story, and i can't wait to read more.

okay.... I'm hooked.

Awesome first chapter, can't wait to read more! Please update soon!^_^