rate_review Reviews

i just finished reading all six chapters and this was great. i had
a feeling that whoever was doing this had left the condom for them
to find on purpose and after reading the last chapter i was right. i
guess we all know who the murderer is since the baboon fur gave him
away. right? but anyway, will they find out who it is before anyone
else is killed? and will you show exactly what inuyasha and sesshomaru
did to him to 'ruin' his life? what a creep. he did something evil but
yet they ruin his life.

well, i hope the next update will be so on because i am dying to see
how he is going to make inuyasha and sesshomaru pay for what they did
to him.

So Naraku has a grape against those sexy Inu brothers, huh? 'Silly Rabbit' or I should say 'Silly baboon/spider'! You are fastly becoming one of the few writers that make me do the chair dance! I squealed when I saw that you have a new chapter up! You're doing an awesome job! Keep it up. B reading U!

BTW: Thanks 4 the shout out! But, the honor is all MINE! ^_~!

damn...this dude is smart...poor Sesshy and Inu

Ahhh, I wouldn't have expected the SesshouxInu relationship in this (even though it was in this section) until this last chapter. Woot! That was nice ^^ I love "law enforcement" fics (I have two that I really need to update methinks XD) so I'm anxious to see how yours goes!

I think you could use a little betaing/editing, cause every now and then there's misspelled words and little silly grammatical errors that only the anal and picky would see (like me *cough* X3) but yeah, the story seems pretty good, I'd like to see more interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru though since this, while having originally been InuxKago, was converted to SesshouxInu. I understand that they boys have to be discrete and that the fic is focused on the crime at hand but I think... well what I mean by more "interaction" between them is like, they talk more, give each other looks of "understanding something others don't" (not necessarily sexual), as well as a little more in depth description of the murders themselves, etc.

Uh, also *cough* Shower sex... is very hard to have cause of the water washing away natural lubrication (at least in the female body) and... the lack of it for a male would probably hurt Inuyasha and, if Sesshou continued regardless if it caused Inu pain, Sessh wouldn't last long at all...*cough*... uh... yeah. Ya know, not that I would know *blush* XXD but WOO! That was hot regardless XD

I look forward to see what got the guys outta bed so fast in the next chapter! Great job!



-DM

sex over now back to work I like that

I kindof had a feeling that Kagura was the other body found! Thanks for the peek into Sesshomaru and InuYasha's private life! It was very insightful. Such an awesome story, with a really hot lemon. This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!

B reading U!

So far from what I have read this does sound like something from a CSI case. Which is a good thing because that means that people will want to read this. Can you give a little background as to why this person wants to do the brothers harm? Not to give away the plot, but just enough to have us thinking. What I was thinking was that no matter what we come up with the fic will end the way you want and are just along for the ride. Right now it could be anybody that has a grudge against them. Too include somebody working with them on the night shift or the day crew. You never know. But you do have me thinking. Keep it up!!!!!!

i really like the concern that sess shows for inu even if it is not as open due to the stigma of there heritage. that humans don't understand. you are doin a real good job. check your email when you can it explains about my story.....please update soon.

with much respect
your friend

Sexy Sesshy

hey i love this Csi and inuyasha together both oh are my favz wow what a treat.....please update soon

and sesshomaru can investigate me anytime.;D
hahaahahhahahahaha

with much respect

Sexy Sesshy

Holy shit! I LOVE all the C.S.I show and the Law and Orders! You did an AWESOME JOB wrapping them into a tight InuYasha fan fic plot! A crazed serial rapist/killer on the loose, in a big city! I was on the edge of my damn seat! My heart is still racing! I bet the other victim is Kana's sister Kagura. Question...are InuYasha and Sesshomaru still related in this fic? Or r they just Inuyoukai and Inuhanyou from different families? And, are they mated, or just fooling around with each other?

I can hardly wait 2 read the next chapter! I hope u update soon! B reading U!