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for Twist of Reality

by ryotgurl19

person snowbird
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They mated! That was a nice hot lemon. Maybe Inuyasha will mate with Kagura whenever he catches up with her. haha heehee. I'm mean, aren't I.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! However there were a few typing errors. You omitted the word meat. When first describing Sesshoumaru's food. There were a few others but nothing spell check won't fix. I cna't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. I think you are going a great job! Oh, and nice lemon =P lol ^_^
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in here, nope it is the story...hot hot hot
person Ladylara
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was amazing. I am glad that the tension is finally over. nice work.
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! The length was good! Yay! Now do it again soon! Haha!
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you still have my attention with this story I can tell you that much. For once someone wrote that he has a traditional japanese palace. And for that, you have my respect. I await your next chapter
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep it going please
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you were wanting more reviews, you might want to post yor story to http://inuyasha-fanfiction.com/. The people there seem to review more and give mre feedback! If you are interested. Update soon!
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did good, I only wanted longer chapters because I love this story. But, I want you to update a lot lol. It's up to you, no matter what you do it'll be good. I really like this one and think you are doing a wonderful job.

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