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by TwilightAlien

person Rawthorne
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have loved this story. I am a huge fan of aliens...and this is such a nice rendition of them. Combined with my favorite asshole Taiyoukai. :)
Please keep writing...I look forward to more additons!
person Reymond
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter : a very good surprise ! What's going on in, such a surprise in the feelings through the reading ! And an actual surprise : how it turns in the end, a good laugh and a lot of satisfaction : things are becoming better and better between these two somehow original hearts !
thanks thanks thanks !!!

Merely Truth
person Reymond
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm truly relieved after this chapter ! Wasn't so sure about what was happening.....
Hope it will become more and more "tender" between these two !
Thank you !

Merely Truth
person Ketsume
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, O.O I've been so, amazingly entranced... By your story! I loves it! It's like that great book, you just cant put down no matter how much you try to! I love the way you have not only developed the relationships, but the growth of the characters is beautifully done as well, XD though you really do need that new betta, :D something I would be glad to help you with, :)as I mentally fix most problems, when I read almost any, and all forms of fan fiction. :3
just PM me, or e-mail me :)

www.serenaraine16@yahoo.com
person Reymond
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ACTION ! yeah ! I could no more know what to believe after last chapter's end and yet, I'm relieved... The old turttle is very funny.
Thanks for the stressing situation !

French reader,
Merely Truth
person Reymond
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aow aow aow !!! What's going on ? I'm affraid, she isn't normal, he suffers !! You are warned : I love happy ends and only that. So, make me happy !!!

Joyeuses Pâques !
Your french reader,

Merely Truth
person Reymond
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru ! He is jealous and doesn't aknowledge the reality... That's coming, I feel it, a claiming ?? Hmmmm ! The story is going well ; I wonder about the old insane tortoise...
You know, without a beta you're very good ; I wasn't shocked by horrible mistakes ;)

Thank you for your wonderful story !

Your french reader,
Merely Truth
person Reymond
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good to read you again... What manner of game is she playing ?? I can seem understand what is going on. Suspense ! Poor Sesshomaru, he is already taken and doesn't know it !
Thank you !

Your french reader,
Merely Truth
person Vampress
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sessy & an alien kitana, very entertaining, indeed. Very much enjoying story. please send me an email when you update.
person Reymond
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm Mmm ! He IS jealous ! When is he going to acknowledge that ???
It was too short, snif !

A bientôt,

Merely Truth

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