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this is getting good cant wait for more

Interesting. I like where it is going. Thanks. One suggestion. Please don't do too many repeats of moments. That gets distracting.

I am about to melt.
That was so awesome!

So far so good. Different. I don't think I've read a vampiric Inuyasha story with S/I before (and I do believe I've read them all...LOL)
I have to agree with Viper though. I know your trying to present both perspectives, but it might be better if you attempt that through a narrative rather than switching POV's. Switching POV's usually isn't real successful in the 'flow' of the story, it usually distracts/confuses the reader.

Interesting begining.

Wow. Vamires in the fic. I want to see how it goes