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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know this only a one shot, but it was pretty good. Maybe you should think about continuing it, that's just my opinion though.
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the ending... Why aren't you satisfied with it? If he had killed her or something, I wouldn't have liked it either, but that's not the case, so... Loved the ending! ^^