rate_review Reviews

A very interesting twist on the whole 'Sesshoumaru uses kagome to get the sword/revenge' plot! And well written too. You said in your comments that the plot wasn't very well developed but I don't agree with you on that; it's a simple plot, perhaps, but well thought out. You could have easily turned it into a multi-chaptered fic, but I am happy that you didn't. I think in oneshots or short stories the challenge is to transfer your purpose with the story with a limited amount of words. Where in a multi-chaptered story you have the 'room' to not be very eloquent at all times. In my opinion, writing a good oneshot is more difficult than writing a long story. Good work, and I hope to see the next part soon!

Can't wait for part two!!!

Wow Great story, very well written
*adds to my bookmarks*
i cant wait for part 2