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I love this story it is so sad and well written and I really hope you write that sequel

Thanks for sharing

This was awesome! I hope you do a sequel for it!

B reading U!

Excellent.
Strangely, it reads less like prose and more like poetry in certain
parts and that's not a bad thing, far from it. It's actually brilliant.

~WR

This was a bit depressing for me to read but I really liked it. I would love to read what Sesshoumaru thinks when he can't find Inuysha on the day he returns. I feel as if he should have to suffer too. Also, it would be nice to see what he really thinks of his brother. Is Inuyasha really just a tool to assuage his lust or does he feel something more for his brother? I can't wait for what's next. Please do write it soon.

Very nice! Monologues seem to be your strength. Passionate, gritty, & convincing. Love it, love it, love it! Eager to read your next installment. ^_^

Not bad. I'm normally not a fan of first person, but this is done really well. I'm impressed.

You explained how Inuyasha felt very clearly and in such a way that it made me feel so badly for him [and I want to knock Sesshomaru's teeth right from his skull, but that's not important. ;)] Again, nicely done and I look forward to your next update. :D