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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Sesshomaru sees the dedication inuyasha puts into their relationship. He took a glass shard for him. Now thats true love right there. Hope Inu's alright. Cant wait for another update.
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I get the feeling that that gift is gonna be trouble. Concealing the shards of mirror perhaps? Oh well, I'm sure the two of them will figure any such trickery out.

That aside, I really, really hope you do a chapter focusing on Mamoru and Kagura, or possibly one with Kagura and the two inu at somepoint. Mamoru's condition sounds delightfully unfortunate, and inviting Inu into their little games could get Sess ahead in making his little brother more comfortable, both with her and with him having a female partner down the road. Just a suggestion of course....

Great work once again, I can't wait to read more!
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was one hell of a chapter.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good update when i was done I had to agree with Sesshy. He better step up his Game if he wants to keep inuyasha. I admit that if someone gave me such a gift i would be in awe of its splendor. Toys and knick-knacks are not as flattering but the thought counts also how he admires inuyasha unselfishness. Cant wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Naraku! He seems to always be helping Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru along. But then again making Sesshoumaru jealous and more possessive might just be part of his new evil scheme. I look forward to reading more.
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schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that was lovely it wasn't surprising that Sesshoumaru had an affair with Kagura although I never thought her particularly pretty I guess a guy would. And little Inuyasha's jealousy was cute for awhile it's a shame he couldn't have Sesshoumaru's pup though I love Mpregs when Inuyasha gets preggers it always makes the story that much more interesting and exciting. I think Inuyasha would perfer the train set to the necklace Inuyasha was never into frilly girly stuff that are flashy and ostentatious like Naraku's gift sounds like. Besides Inuyasha isn't stupid he would know that Naraku's interest wasn't real just a way to get what he wants I mean it's not like that isn't obvious he's like see through glass when it comes to that. He is so creepy. Thank you so much for sharing and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh my damn!! Geez Naraku went there, he totally trumped Sesshoumaru! What to do now, what to do now? Argh I hate the fact that what Sesshoumaru said about him having to take a female mate at some point to have heirs is true, but I wonder if he considered that the same could apply to InuYasha. I mean I know he mentioned him having his own consorts to amuse himself with after the thousand years but I mean he doesn't even want Kagura to touch InuYasha. Has he not thought of if InuYasha chose another woman to suddenly impregnate and maybe even have the potential to dote on her the way he dotes in him. I don't think Sesshoumaru would appreciate that. And even as much as Sesshoumaru honours his wishes, I don't think Sesshoumaru could let InuYasha go. I don't believe he would just let him leave. He may agree to give him space for a while but with the same way that he bided his time to get InuYasha used to the idea of them being intimate I believe he'd bide his time to get him back into his bed, if not use a little bit of seduction along the way. I don't know, I think Sesshoumaru is going to find as much as he knows InuYasha doesn't like the idea of not being the only one, he's gonna feel the same if others (like Naraku is now) start trying to get in the way of InuYasha's affection.
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not sure how i feel about this one
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw Inu is jealous. Sesshoumaru will remedy that soon enough.

I had a thought, about that glass shard that's missing from Kanna's mirror. What if it was no longer in the form of glass? Maybe what it really was, when the glass shard went missing and Hakudoshi touched Inu's hair was some kind of tracking spell, to lead them to Kagura....I don't know this thought just came to me though as I was reading about them in the village. It seems like something sneaky enough for Naraku to do, especially if they have suspicions that she is still alive...ehh, just a thought. =)
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could they be any more adorable together? I hope so! I loved this chapter. I'm getting so antsy about what Naraku is really up to. I want to find out so badly but I'll be patient. Thanks for the update. I look forward to more.

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