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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was....damn. That was hot as hell! The yaoi between them was so sexy. The thought of Inu being left there presented is soo great. And I love how you still managed to keep them beautifully in character. Now I just can't wait for the "trussed up" bout of sex promised by Sesshomaru! Great job as always, I can't wait to read more of this awesome story!
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about bloody time and very well written. awww inu was jealous how cute but jealous of naraku...well physically wise i can see that, mentally and emotionally naraku is a sadistic bastard lol. im glad they finally came together, no pun intended, now if they can just get rid of the spider demon things will go back to semi-normal...right...right...
ok can't wait to read the next chapter :D
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY YAY YAY!!! worth the wait thnk u
person jdbbrz27
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot and so worth the wait thank you so much I loved it. Well everyone knows a bit of jealousy can go along way in this instance it certainly did like Inuyasha giving himself to Sesshoumaru. I love how caring and sweet and loving Sesshoumaru was and I don't think it would be ooc because he may be a demon but he still feels things and he would probably act this way if he wants Inuyasha like he does so I loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS I COULD JUST ROLL OVER WITH MY TONGUE HANGING OUT MY MOUTH LoL!!! For a moment there when Sesshoumaru left I thought maybe Naraku might find his way in or something like that but I'm glad he didn't. This was a really special moment that the both of them needed, and it shows a lot of progress emotionally for the two of them. Love Love Love!! Oooo-weee now just gotta see what that creepy spider has to say about this new development XD
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOoooohhhh something good is gonna happen!!! Finally! 28 chapters in and i'm gripping my pillow in anticipation!!
person jdbbrz27
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and boy do you make Naraku even more creepy then the anime does. It gives me the heebie jeebies. And poor innocent little Inuyasha in the middle of it all. Boy and we though Sesshoumaru was arragant and obnoxious Naraku is way over him thinking that he's the center of everyone's universe ewwww. He really needs to get a clue I can't wait to see where this goes next thank you so much for sharing.
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*hugs Natsumi* Poor critter, I hate that she was abused so. I hope Inuyasha gets his chance for roasted tentacle. Though i'm certain there's much more to unfurl before then :)
person jdbbrz27
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting to say the least. It should be interesting to see how slimy Naraku handle a possessive and jealous Sesshoumaru when it comes to Inuyasha. Also how Inuyasha handles a creepy lechorous Naraku without losing his cool hell he couldn't handle a hands on Sessoumaru let alone a touchy feely creep. I can't wait to see what happens next. The bit with the tentacle and sword was really good liked it alot. Subtle but effective on Inuyasha's part.
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work as always!

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