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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it just gets better and better. It's very original and yet your characters and scenarios are *so* Inuyasha! I love the pacing and tone of your writing. This was a great action sequence (5 Narakus!) that had bravery, heart and humor (a jealous Sessy in the heat of battle, awesome). Thanks for keeping this story going so well and updating so regularly. It's easy to be your fan! :) I'll hate to see it end, but I have loved every bit of it. Thanks.
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally 'Awww'ed at Sesshy's last comment haha! Epic!
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay totally awesome and well wow I loved the bit about Kikyo and the demon tree and the spiritual tree coming together that was beautiful and you knew it was not only to save the world but mostly to save their favorite half demon as well. And when I saw that bit about Sessh and his arm and sword in the anime it really impressed me it was such a cool thing to happen when he finally acknowledged that the tetsuiga was not his but his sweet loving brother's who always needed and deserved it so much more than Sessh. Is this the end or will their be more it makes a lovely ending but I'm always one who yearns for more if it is could you at least let me know my e-mail is brzachman@yahoo.com otherwise I'll continually look for more updates and get really depressed. Thank you for this totally awesome story and you are a really good writer and this story is for sure one of my favorites.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg. everything was done to profection. let me know if you are going to do another one. the story was great
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A beautifully done battle sequence. I sniffled when the old tree was thought dead. I was happy to see Naraku go at last and you did the whole scene nicely. keeping in the spirit of the series. The shards and change from the trees and Kikyo was a very nice touch. I figured you'd get the sword and shiny new arm in there :) Yay for the brothers! Can they have their nap and bath now? I think Sesshoumaru could use both...and Inuyasha some councilling.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that they defeated Naraku. He is such a pain in the ass.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. I hope there is no ending to it. I can't wait for an update.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable like how things are coming together, questions answered. Quite a bit was accomplished this time YEA! The brothers coming together, gangster trees.Two arms,wow, Sessy finally grew up & accepted his brother fully sword & all. Toetisli your take on him is awesome but so Is Sessy's mom.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok I read this whole story again. It took me all night, but it was so worth it. I hope that you keep updating. Right now I am having serious writer's block.....again........and I have resigned myself to reading the stories on here until I can get the urge to start writing again. It isn't for inspiration since my stories pale to what you bring out in yours. In fact I find some of the chapters in one of my tales to be long winded and irksome. I will most likely have to edit them again. Being your own beta and being an author at the same time is like having a full time job.
Anyway, love your story and will be waiting for the next chapter to come out with bated breath. You are truly an artist.
Anyway, love your story and will be waiting for the next chapter to come out with bated breath. You are truly an artist.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very ominus to say the least man Naraku really has to be brought down that evil ass hole just thinking about what he wanted to do to Inuyasha makes me see red. Can't really blame Natsumi's little sweety though to save Inuyasha or really anyone they loved anyone would do the same thing. Grant you the guards and ministers should have kept a closer eye on him than they did knowing how close he was to the little lady demon. But things happen as they happen and great writers like you always know that. I can't wait till Inuyasha and Sesshomaru take nasty icky Naraku down forever cause he's just ewwwwwww. I also love how little Inuyasha has changed Sesshomaru so much something true love does it brings out the best in someone even if it's hidden deep like Sesshomaru's compassion and caring was even in the anime he changed for the better like that so it's not really that far out of character at all and you have basically kept Inuyasha in almost complete character and I love that I mean he is perfect anyway other than being a bit insecure at times and Sesshomaru is helping him on that score to. I love this story and can't wait for the next update thank you so much for keeping up with it with timely updates and not making us wait for ever for them.