rate_review Reviews

wow i really love this! :) i cant wait to read more! hahaha so much entertainment for me! hahaha thanks for sharing the story! i will be faithfully watching for an update!

i like the story.
update it soon please.
i cant wait for more.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~

This is a great story. The plot is clever, and the verbal exchanges are entertaining and funny. I think Sesshomaru is hot as hell too! LOL One piece of advice though...try to keep your story in the same tense. If you re-read, sometimes you start narrating in present tense, while generally you're telling the story in third person. Other than that, (which is really not much at all) I can't wait to see what you've got planned.

omg tell me there will be more! this is so good! this was great! i think it was really well writen! :) i hope to see more work from you! if you would like to contact me you can. at darksexykurai@hotmail.com (i love really love to see more work) hahaha

it would be very interesting to see where you would take this story to. I would love to read more of this & I hope you continue