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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol this chapter is really funny !
"he truly was like a puppy trying to intimidate an older dog." This is such a cute way to describe inuYasha !
"The hanyou seemed to need a moment or two to come up with a retort, and so Sesshomaru allowed it, vaguely curious as to what his defence would be. Finally, Inuyasha's face cracked a triumphant grin." This is my favourite part from the whole chapter. I just love InuYasha's cute antics !
Loved the chappie ! Moving on to the next !
"he truly was like a puppy trying to intimidate an older dog." This is such a cute way to describe inuYasha !
"The hanyou seemed to need a moment or two to come up with a retort, and so Sesshomaru allowed it, vaguely curious as to what his defence would be. Finally, Inuyasha's face cracked a triumphant grin." This is my favourite part from the whole chapter. I just love InuYasha's cute antics !
Loved the chappie ! Moving on to the next !
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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww this is so unfair ! You stopped at a really big cliffie ! Loved the story ! Can't wait to read the next chapter ! Please update soon ^_^
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I will keep looking for updates.
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
smooth writing - really good story. I'd argue against Inu just being a meat shield - but you are entitiled to your POV, hehehe Im interested to see where you are taking this good luck.