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okay i want to read this but the spacing is ridiculous. can you please take a look at it, so that you can make it a tad smaller. there's like 5 - 7 spaces between ever bit of writing.

Update? Pwease?

this story just keeps getting better and better!

Oooohh!!! why is sessh cold to her all over again? I liked him better in dreams :p I love this story and can't wait for the next update ;)

this cant be completed already. i need to no wat happens next. plz update soon

I like your story, but I am annoyed that I must keep checking this website that I'm not a fan of waiting for updates. Please post it quickly or consider posting it on dokuga.com.

Really good. I like the plot and look foreward to reading more.

please continue this story soon I'm dying to see what happens next & if Inuyasha can smell who or what caused the damage to the well.what I don't understand is if Sessh loves or wants Kagome & whether or not he is the one who instigated this dream relationship,courtship,thing to get close to her & be with her...by now at least he should know there is nothing more than friendship between her & Inuyasha & has never been anything other than friendship between her & Inuyasha & that she has never been with any man other than him in dreams or when awake so I don't understand why he wouldn't just approach her himself & attempt friendship,he could even ask her in her dreams if he came to her in real life would she give him a chance & take a chance & being that it is dishonorable to trick a being into bed as it would appear like rape which is the most dishonorable act especially seeing as she is obviously becoming uncomfortable with the thought of being alone,being sick & being asked repeatedly if she were pregnant while she knows herself to be a virgin & wanting to return to the future permanently while only putting it off for fear of losing her connection to him & combine this with the fact that he obviously fears for her safety since she already did die once while with him in dreamland,doesn't want to lose his connection with her & if he is insatiable with her body while dreaming & trying to get her pregnant,would he not desire even moreso the ability to really feel her in his arms & have her, hold her,mark her & keep her safe himself??? He has no control over what can & will happen while she's awake,could he sit by knowing she's carrying his pup or pups & do nothing but wait for her to sleep especially since she died once while he was with her in a dream. I can't imagine Sessh sitting by in such a seemingly cowardly manner & now with the well's destruction & her inability to return to her family,her extreme fear & panic would endanger her abilitty carry the child & be dangerous for her, if he did indeed care for her in the slightest his beast would be going insane by now

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I totally love how this story is going, it´s a really good work, and yor writing style is awesome. Can´t wait for the next chapter ;)