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Inuyasha must escape and hopefully tell Sesshoumaru to fuck off after what Sesshoumaru is thinking of him now. After all Inuyasha has gone through his brother doesn't want to touch him. What a bastard. Inuyasha is better off with Kagome if Sesshoumaru thinks of the poor boy as dirty and discardable. I hope Inuyasha finds a safe place to run to and that Kouga finds him first. Kouga wouldn't treat Inuyasha the way Sesshoumaru would and just maybe the wolf could get Sesshoumaru jealous enough to see how precious Inuyasha really is.

don't know how i feel about this one....

Aww, poor Inu, I have to say I love how in character he is. Even as beaten and abused as he is he's still calculating and determined as all hells. And, it's nice to see that Sesshomaru is slowly realizing just how much his little brother really means to him, that their attachment is more than just an alpha keeping what belongs to him. Very nice, and I can't wait to read more!

I liked this chapter, and thank you for noting parts that were kind of forceful. When I was talking earlier, I meant graphic rape with penetration. screaming, everything, That scene you did well with, and I really appreciate the asterisks. Thank you! Anyway, I like that Sesshomaru is able to touch Tessaiga, because he is trying to find and help his brother so he should be allowed to touch it, I think. I also like that Sesshomaru is not as cold as he is in the show. It shows us that he does have feelings for Inuyasha but they are confusing to him. I enjoyed when he and Rin were talking and i thought that was very cute. I liked that Inuyasha is fighting as hard as he can. It makes more sense that he would fight. Anyway, I wish you luck with the next chapter!

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I didn't like that it will take sooo long to rescue Inuyasha because I hate to think of what will happen to him during that time, but at least the time is not spent being idle. The dream sequence was very interesting and I enjoyed it. The flashback about Suzu was very sad and made me a bit angry at Sesshomaru, but it makes sense that he would test his loyalties in the most humiliating of ways to make sure the assassins weren't being deceptive. Anyway, I wish you luck with the next chapter.

I know it sounds like a sad futile plea but don't let Inuyasha be damaged too badly. If you have a rape scene, please list it as such because I get too emotional as it is with stories, and rape scenes make me (and others) feel absolutely sick to my stomach. If you would please add a few asterisks above it or something and then a few asterisks when it ends I would really appreciate it. It seems like a stupid request but please consider doing so if you include a rape scene in this story. Sorry to ramble!

I loved this last chapter. It was so steamy and hot although I just can't imagine Inuyasha dancing like that even if it is sexy as hell. Poor Inuyasha, I wonder how he his doing. I worry so for my dear hanyou. He better be ok damnit!

I am really liking how this is turning out. I feel very upset that Inuyasha was captured but I cannot wait to see what is done to retrieve him. I am really looking forward to the next chapter! I enjoyed this one but I really want Inuyasha to be saved as soon as possible!

Ummmmm.......Isn't Sesshoumaru Inuyasha's mate or am I just nuts? I think Sesshoumaru deserves a good flogging for saying he only wants his brother back for like honor and shit. Everyone knows he wants him back to have in his bed and make Inuyasha all better since that bastard has probably fucked up Inuyasha pretty good. I don't know why Sess has to be such an ass some days.

I will definitely stick with you throughout this story, it is a well-written story, so far. I am really enjoying the suspense although I do hope Sesshomaru can save Inuyasha soon. I love my little puppy-eared half-demon and his strong,seemingly uninterested older brother. I do so love stories that are written about their relationships. :)

Gooooooood. This story is getting bookmarked :-) I can't wait to see what happens next!