rate_review Reviews

Oh Sweet Jesus, where to begin? This plotline was brilliant! I was amazed with this story. I hardly ever find a story that, as a grammar Nazi, satisfies my need for everything to be precise. Please continue this, it will make my year.

Kouga is so cute. He is such a sweetie pie to Kagome and is doing his best to help her understand youkai mating. I hope they find Inuyasha soon and that Sesshoumaru will be able to help Inuyasha after what that bastard has probably done to him. I want Inuyasha safe! Poor little hanyou.

No, you explained it right, I'm just low on steam right now. I'm about to Graduate so I am pushing my limits.

But thank you for the update.

This is an intense story. I hope they find Inuyasha soon! I found this chapter intriguing and good but I am overwhelmed by worry over poor Inuyasha. I really hope he comes out of this all without being completely mangled. Also, why does Sesshomaru have to go to his father's castle? I reread the story and I couldn't find a solid reason. Does he just need to drop off Rin and Jaken or is he going to get reinforcements or weapons? I really like this story and I hope to read more soon!

about #4...

Just wanted to say I'm enjoying this...and please
let Inuyasha give those fools a taste of their own
medicine, especially after they abused the poor
child's 'member' with that whip! DEFINITELY
payback time...

I have one word, HOT! This chapter is my favorite so far.

I hope someone kills that black inu dog stone DEAD!!!! Inuyasha should have been basking in his heat with Sesshomaru instead of being parted from him. Please don't let inuyasha be raped by Minio and crew, it would break him and I do so love my little puppy-eared friend and his gorgeous big brother.

Very original plot, Sessy injected with poision how did they catch him unawares the first time? Poor Inuyasha hope they get to him in time. Oh ka-hoe-may can take his place as as passed around slut. She is not thick just EVIL & MEAN. Loved the monk telling her to get up & help or go home, that was long over due. Her toddler tantrums for a girl almost a woman, seems her family celebrates every time she leaves. She hurts Shippo more than help him. Glad Sessy tired to set her straight but she really is not worth anyone's time or effort. Sango doesn't have much to say like she is afraid of not letting k-hoe get her way.

Update soon whose this new inu tribe? Could you send email updates. I'd hate to miss a chapter.

Sesshomaru still being out of character some makes sense because he has just endured being captured and then dealing with all of the stuff with Inuyasha, so it sort of makes sense. I really enjoyed this story so far. I found it riveting and amazingly intriguing. I am a pessimist when reading story summaries, and thought it was going to be dissatisfying. I was very wrong! I really enjoyed this story and I do hope to read more soon! Please write more when you get a chance!

I like this update. Sad that Sessh kept it a secret that he got his memories back. I wonder why he didn't leave Inu when he got them back. I guess he really must care for his lil bro. Well, I hope that you update soon. I must know if Inuyasha will be okay.

And yea you are right about the suspense. I am no good at suspense, i dont think....but, I guess that's what you ask someone for so they can help.

Anyways, hope to see an update soon. This was a long one, my butt is numb. LOL Thanks for the update.