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Awww, they are so cute together. I quite like the vicious Inuyasha. He deserves to serve out a little payback. I wonder if Sesshoumaru could train Inuyasha and help him gain his strength back faster if he draws Inuyasha's youki out during that time. I feel as though Inuyasha won't fully get over his trauma unless he faces those who hurt him and defeats them, but that feels a ways off. As always, can't wait for the next update.

Exactly what I expected ! So nice ! But it's so long before they will have physic contacts. . .
Thank you for your story.

Your french reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

I'm definetly sure that inuyasha speaks with a new york irish immagrint accent from the 1800's.
Udder than that waiting for updates has a wanning effect on the hurry up side.
Good Story!!

Wohooo!!!! Finally! Finally Inuyasha agree to become his mate and kiss Sessh... heheheh

Well... another lovely chapter that I absolutely loved to read. Where to start... the beginning? Why yes, yes that is a good idea.

At the beginning, my feelings were in fact those of Bishamon needs to get over himself. I mean I understood his reasoning, but Suzu was right and the other was not a child. It was a bit upsetting at this point because it is obvious that neither of them understood the other and it was easy to feel for both of them. I kind of like how ashamed Bishamon felt when Suzu went from mildly flirtatious to serious. Ah Suzu.. even small parts make me want to.. *coughs a few times*.

Back to the story... I love how Bishamon had comforted Suzu. I felt it was a very powerful and beautifully done moment with them to show their friendship. Once again I wanted to hug Suzu and tell him everything would be ok. He is a very easy to relate to and feel for, to me at least. I like the fatherly role Sesshomaru seems to adopt around Fuyuki as well even though he merely offered his advice on the matter. It was heartwarming.

Now as for Lord Botanmaru and his wife. I was sooooo hoping that Sesshomaru would just slice their heads off. How dare they make Inuyasha feel all worthless and the like. The cute scene where Inuyasha was being all mother like to the younger ones was adorable and I was happy Sesshomaru was impressed and complimented Inuyasha. I love the dual evil parenting skills.

However, come the lunch I believe it was I really hated Lord Botanmaru and his wife more. If I was Sesshomaru, I would have probably broken character and told her "Regardless of my brother being a half demon, he is still royalty of two not one, but two lands, he is my intended which is not changing, and I damn sure would not be leaving him for someone who looks like they throw up and then call it clothes! At least my brother has better fashion sense than some simpering good for nothing tactless so called--" Inuyasha would have stepped in then probably with so much pride he forgot himself momentarily to give Sesshomaru a mind blowing kiss. And when they attacked Inuyasha, Sesshomaru should have killed them and then somehow made it up to Inuyasha saying it was his instinct to protect him.

Fuyuki... well... I will admit to um... partially imagining him all over Rei like that. It was rather hot even though Suzu is such a little instigator but I still love him. I had to admit I felt really bad and wanted to cry for Fuyuki at the end of it. I mean, he had just wanted attention and because he couldn't wait or understand or let the other apologize to him properly. And as horrible as it may sound it almost seemed like he raped Fuyuki, now obviously his demon just took over and he wasn't really in control of it, but it did feel that way. I mean I know Fuyuki was wrong and yet it was just like... "noooo don't hurt him". It was a rather hot sexy scene though and then I wanted to cry at the end.

My poor poor emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Well done ! I can't imagine how Bishamon will feel about himself after he realizes what he has done.....
Thank you for your story !

A french mother,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

I love this story. Please update soon!

oh yay! im so glad fuyuki is mated now XD and poor inuyasha!!! those assholes were so mean!

Love that last chappie. I really enjoyed them all. I wish there was a way to let readers know when you update.

I loved the chapter. It was nice and cute the way Inuyasha asked if Sesshomaru was proposing towards the end. I am worried about Suzu having to train Inuyasha in the things that Sesshomaru wants him trained in. I wanted to smack Sesshomaru across the face for asking something like that of sweet little Suzu, I mean really, he should have known better. *kicks Sesshomaru in a very private place and nods* Much better. Now...

I was reading the chapter and then... "Scoffing, Inuyasha dragged the smaller bird youkai back to his bed and pushed him down onto it...". I will like to inform you that my mind went straight to very very naughty places and barely recovered as I kept reading before...

"Suzu touched the hanyou’s mouth to stop him from rambling some more and, moving his fingers down to grasp his chin, lightly pressed their lips together in a chaste kiss."

Then my mind died and claimed you like to torture me since while I know what actually happened in the story -- there was some Inuyasha/Suzu smexiness going on in my head. This is completely your fault and I hope you will take responsibility for your actions. I mean for a few minutes I was like "Sesshomaru who?" and finally I came to my senses... somewhat. LOL.

I love Suzu so much and this chapter made me want to hug him. Those memories were just terrible and the fact that he had to suffer through all of that was just... heartbreaking. *hugs Suzu* He just makes you want to tell him that it will all be ok and to hold him tightly before you eventually decide to jump him and make him scream to high heaven. Nothing like having it all in one package. *giggles* Can't wait for the next chapter.