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I am glad that Suzu is alive and that the scars are gone. He deserves happiness as does Inuyasha. I hope that they find it soon.

this chapter was so cute! i loved learning more about Yuzu's background! but i also cant WAIT to read about inuyasha's heat! but im glad you letting the story slowly progress, it flows much smoother that way.

You are more than welcome to use anything I suggest to you in the reviews. So yes those exact lines or something similar and the name and anything else you are more than welcome to use.

Suggestions? Kill Kagome? Lol.

No I was just thinking it would be hilarious if by some strange chance of fate both her and Michio were bound to one another and couldn’t do anything against each other. Like with beads but both her and Michio both have them and the only one who could remove them would be Suzu who would never remove them.

It was cute seeing jealous Sesshomaru but even cuter seeing how jealous Inuyasha got in regards to Suzu’s flirting…. And speaking of Suzu….
*sniffles* Why did you make him commit suicide? I mean I am sure you are going to bring him back, but seriously… that didn’t stop me from screaming “No! Suzu… why… nooooo.”

Love the chapter and can’t wait for the next one… since I want Suzu back lol.

Not cool Suzu not cool. I adore that silly little peacock though. I must admit I still get SUPER happy with the grooming dog-like affections they do like the ear biting and the whining. Just so unique and awesome!!!!!!!!!!! SQUEE! I hope you do indeed update this upcoming saturday so excited to read the next chapter! :D

I wasn't able to review until now since I join the site. I love the story! Will they be able to figure out what was done to Kagome? I'd like to see Inuyasha come to Sesshoumaru's aid, but at the same time just for Sesshoumaru to figure it out and just kill her already. Can't wait to the next chapter1

great story with good details and an actual plot, I love it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! =)

Love it so far, look forward to more!!!

I thought you were never going to update! Thanks for that last chapter although I would still like Kagome six feet under. I don't trust her at all. I want Inuyasha safe and happy in Sess's arms. He needs his big brother's love so much and I want to see him get it. I also want to see the two of them get it on, but I know that takes time especially with all that Inuyasha has been through.

If I was Sesshomaru, she wouldn't have lived that long. However, I liked seeing Sesshomaru jealous and protecting. The part with the demon in Inuyasha's mind feeling trapped was both sad and beautiful to read. Sad because it wasn't free and beautiful the way it interact with Sesshomaru still seeking his approval even though he was hurt and felt betrayed. It was also beautifully sad how the demon within Inuyasha had been calling out for Sesshomaru for years. I loved it.

Who should you put Suzu with? Perhaps another OC (ME) named Akira (Male ME) with black hair (ME) slightly older (ME) a bit wiser (ME) kind of tall (I'm not.. but we will say it's me) maybe a warrior or something (still me) a youkai type you decide (..hint.. it will still be me...). Yep yep. I think that is perfect for Suzu. I would say that I am bit sad that Suzu wasn't in this chapter, however, I may or may not have kidnapped him. XD jk jk.

Besides the serious vote of ME for Suzu, I am not sure who you could put him with. He is a complex character with different emotions that make it easy to fall in love with him. Perhaps someone who can see past his obvious defense mechanisms of sexual teasing and the like. Someone who can see the real Suzu and is interested in him for him not just a great looking mate. Compassionate and caring and not afraid to try and break through the barriers like...for example...

-Suzu went over to the other youkai in his usual teasing manner. His body language enticing and his eyes displaying a hint of mischief in them as he sat on the new general's lap. "You look like you are dying for some fun.", whispers and leans in a bit licking his lips.
The other youkai looked at him. "No... I am not in need of fun though I do wonder why someone so beautiful hides who they really are. I know its necessary for battle, but is it really necessary around friends?", he said and looked more at Suzu. "Definitely exceptionally beautiful and yet the sadness hidden in your eyes makes me want to know how I can erase it."-

Sorry for butchering Suzu's personality somewhat, but I do think something like that would be great for Suzu. Someone who will try to pull him out of his shell but not force him out of it. Calm and sincere with the goal of mating Suzu and treating him with all the love and respect someone would have for their mate. That's just me though. >.> I am weird.

I love it when Sesshy is so possessive. HOpe more is to come soon please.