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Please update I love this story and I don't know how this website work so please email me at cupidslove.ray88@gmail.com whenever u update thank u

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. I just found it and have loved every word of it :) The idea of the Great Trial is awesome and may possibly be my new head canon! I adore the idea!

I'm sorry to hear about what happened to you. Don't ever feel sorry about having to leave your writing to handle life's events, I hope you and your family are doing well!

Wow, such a great story! And it's even something "probable" for an AU!
I especially love the way you portray the characters, they're are not OoC at all!
Very sorry to read about your accident, I hope everything went more or less okay...
You are doubly awesome for thinking about your readers in such circumstances.
I am eagerly awaiting more InuSess goodness and I am very curious about how you plan to resolve the whole "Khan" plot-line.
Are they going to be their usual BAMF selves and obliterate the Mongols or are they going to have to fight tooth and ...claw? to achieve victory while suffering some heavy loses.
Is someone going to die? When are Inuyasha and Sessomaru going to start developing more "Romantic" feelings for each other? (I want to read some Inucest fluffy goodness! :D)
I can't wait for the next chapter and I sincerely hope you won't put this story on Hiatus. It's one of the few "good" Inuyasha fanfics I've been able to find so far!
Leiliaeli

about #17...

I honestly don't remember this story being in this section. O_o
Tho' it has been a few years since I've been back here, but it does seem
familiar.

Well I'm enjoying it so far, really enjoying the tentative relationship between
Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru. The thing that gave me pause in the beginning was giving
Sesshoumaru a tail, I mean I know he's a dog demon, but he also resides in a humanoid
aristocratic form..no tail to attach there. Other than that, I like the fact you included
certain mannerisms an Inu has, despite being in humanoid form and that's the ''need to howl''.

Anyway, you take care of yourself & looking forward to the end.

I love this story. I keep hoping to read more since it is so well written. I also understand you have had troubles along the way. I pray things will get better for you. With me it has been computer issues and car problems. I have been rereading stories and trying to find out what to write next. We all write these stories for free and all have our own lives to. When you are ready I hope to see more chapters as I truly hope this fandom never dies. By the way, thank you so much for your time in writing this. From a fan and fellow author hope to hear from you again.

I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. I really loved this story and I do hope for more. I am currently taking a small break from writing my Black Butler story to read some of these tales. I really like the detail you put into this story and I love Sesshoumaru's elder brother as he is funny as hell. I also love the banter between Kouga and Inuyasha. More of the bantering please as Inuyasha is perfect with his free speech. I also like how close Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have gotten. I would like to see more sexy moments between the brothers, but this is nice. I hope Inuyasha maybe will have some erotic dreams about Sesshoumaru, that would be funny as hell.

Awesome chapter. Inuyasha is slowly getting use to the palace life. I hope he see that he can have a home with sesshomaru and stay

Ah~ The joy of a story that draws me in and won't QUIT. I sat down to read this in the vague hope that it will be complete one day, but I really wasn't expecting to have my interest caught so quickly or so thoroughly. Lately I've been addicted to FFXIV, but I've been reading on the computer I don't use to actually play games... it's been hard to look away from my reading computer to actually play the game that's been my interest for over a year. That praise aside, let's get to the nitty gritty. :D

I'd like to say, you're doing a very amazing job. I don't expect a lot out of fanfics, but the style of your writing completely draws the reader in and puts them IN that setting, and that's a hard thing to do. If anyone is saying that you're being to descriptive, ignore them, because I love seeing it. As much as you say that Inu is a bit OOC, I think you're keeping him VERY in character. ^^ Keep up the great work.

PS. I'd really love to see Sess on the bottom again >.>;; Call it my favorite moment of the fic haha.

I only just finished reading the last chapter of The Great Trial today. I wanted to wish you congratulations on being pregnant. I hope that the baby is healthy and stays healthy. I completely understand if you cannot find the time to update for a while. I just sincerely hope that you will not discontinue this story, it is to good of a story. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Please update when you can, no pressure. I hope that everything goes well for you and your family. Wishing you the best of luck and happiness, Selena Rose.

OH SO GREAT TO READ THIS HOPE THERE IS MORE SOON