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November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definetly a good start. Like where the story is leading hope for more.
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December 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting why abandon it? Even if you don't have s beta its still good. If people can't get around a few grammer mistakes then they don't deserve to read your story. Please reconcider.
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April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice keep it up
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
update soon