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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't even get half way through this...the spelling is terrible, your sentences make no sense and your story is too rushed.
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August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was a good story but I honestly think there should be a lot more to it.
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good story but is it really completed
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July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this story i hope it get s little more fast paced and kagome gets to be a little more strong willed right now she's a little annoyingly pathetic and sessho is a dick i can't wait till it gets to the good part look forward to the next chapter keep up the good work
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June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
figures it would take divine intervention to stop seshy from being a dick.
at any rate, some of your sentences don't read very smoothly, so puzzling out the meaning it a bit troublesome. watch that, neh?
at any rate, some of your sentences don't read very smoothly, so puzzling out the meaning it a bit troublesome. watch that, neh?
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June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you have some one look at this story and fix the misspellings. Also you should add some meat to it- make the pages longer and more interesting. good plot though.
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
update!