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I love everything about this lol. You are an amazing writer, just pull me in and hot me hooked. I can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction when he finds out about Koga and Sesshomaru. I wonder if he'll think back on all the times he caught a whiff of Koga or still be oblivious lol. 

 

Anywho, I hope that everything is okay with you. I know that anxiety and depression is a bitch to handle. Take your time on the update. Well wait here like good little readers. 

 

 

Happy writing!!

I enjoy My Rival's Brother. I hope that you finish writing the story.

I totally thought this was going to just be a pwp fic and I am glad it's not. You've done a wonderful job in giving this fic a plot. I cannot wait to read more.

I don't understand what Touga was thinking. Sesshoumaru was the only reason he could "retire" and Sesshoumaru carried the business. If Sesshoumaru does end up finding a job I'm sure anywhere would be more than happy to take him in because I'm sure they understand how valuable he is, unlike his stupid father. Keep up the great work! :D

Glad to see an update and I've been struggling with similar issues myself. After a couple years or so of not really updating any fictions, I finally got back into writing and updated one of my original fictions recently, like you. I understand in my own ways and life just seems harder compared to just a few years ago. It has been a really bad year, but I'm trying. If you need someone to talk to, or bounce ideas off, feel free to e-mail me.

Anywho, I was happy to see an update. While I was initially a bit disappointed about the no Mpreg thing, I got over it. You've already done Mpreg before, so I understand you not wanting to write it this time. It's no biggie. The only reason I was into the idea was because it could have caused further complications and issues in the story, which would be awesome. However, this story has enough issues going on so it's all good.

I figured Touga would react this way and wasn't too surprised by his reaction. I love how Kouga and Kouga's father stood up to him, though, and ultimately Sesshoumaru, too. I loved how they pointed out how hypocritical and backwards Touga is. xD

I have a feeling InuYasha is gonna end up running away, or disowning himself, or being disowned, too. xD I say this because even though he's a spoiled kid, he's close with Kouga and won't willingly stop hanging out with Kouga. Not to mention InuYasha may be an idiot, and he may be a jerk, but he's not heartless. Even if he doesn't like his brother much, he will think what his father did was majorly fucked up.There's also the whole thing about Sesshoumaru being the heir, and taking the brunt of Touga's expectations. With Sesshoumaru around, InuYasha didn't have to worry much and could pretty much do as he pleased. True, he was being pushed to be more responsible, but it wasn't resting all on his shoulders like it was with his brother. So what I'm saying is since Sesshoumaru is "gone" from the family, Touga will most likely focus all his attention on InuYasha. He will try to groom him into his heir, and will want to control him. InuYasha will not like this, especially if Touga tries to make him end his infatuation with Miroku or whoever he ends up with that doesn't meet daddy's approval. He's not going to like all the pressure that Touga will put on him. I won't be surprised if InuYasha ends up leaving and living with Kouga and company, or Miroku or someone else after awhile. InuYasha is a rebel and won't take as much shit from his father as Sesshoumaru used to. I also think Touga won't want InuYasha having contact with Sesshoumaru or Kouga, and may attempt to forbid him. InuYasha may be the baby, and Touga overlooked a lot regarding him, but I think now that Touga doesn't Sesshoumaru, he will be less tolerant of InuYasha's behavior. It may not play out as I think, or completely like this, but I'm looking forward to seeing how InuYasha responds to his father, the pressure, and so forth.

Aw, poor Sesshoumaru. At least he has Kouga and a new family to support him in more ways than one. I could easily see Sesshoumaru starting his own business and running it well. He does have the smarts for it, and the experience, so I think eventually he'll have his own career again. I'll laugh if he steals most of his father's clients. That's be sweet justice. xD

Anywho, good chapter and I look forward to the next two updates.

Thank you so very much for updating! We missed you greatly. I was a bit down with the bad weather in my area, and was looking through the stories I had bookmarked when I saw that you had uploaded this a few days ago. My excitement overshadowed the darkness and I quickly opened your story. I enjoyed every last word! It is good that Koga's family took in Sesshomaru, that is why I love wolves so very much. Such a wonderfully social bunch they are. :)
It broke my heart a bit that Sesshomaru's father would do that to his own son in light of his own transgressions, but that is the way of those who believe themselves to be above everyone else. I hope he gets his in the end, not death, but definitely put in his place somehow.
I hope you are feeling better. I'm sure you get tired of hearing how we can sympathize with what you are feeling, but we really do. Depression suck giant ass, and it is harder to get rid of that tar and feathers. I can only say to keep taking each step forward, eventually it does get better. And always remember, you are a beautiful person who brings joy to others, even if you can not see our faces. :)

Finally an update! Love this story. Thought it was a weird couple match up at first but you really make it work and I am hooked!

Yay! You're back! I have missed this story. I know depression is a true B@$!#, because I suffer with it and anxiety, but you can pull through. I wish you the best of luck and I can't wait to read more!

This is literally the thing that got me to start shipping SessKouga! I really love this, it's well written and incredibly hot, and Kouga and Sesshomaru stay believably in character, which can be hard to do especially when giving them traits one wouldn't necessarily assume they would have off the bat, like Sesshomaru being a needy little bottom~ And on top of it all, it's got elements of a plot mixed in! Fantastic job with this, it really just makes me wish for new chapters for it forever~

Can't wait to see how the mpreg will fit into the budding story line.