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January 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Ove it. Please continue . I am hooked.
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December 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! I really hope you get a chance to continue and some day finish this story because I'm in love with it. Everything about it amazing; the complex relationship between Kouga and Rin, the one lovely one between Inuyasha and Ayame, and Sess' twisted plot. Ooohh! I'm just so intrigued and delighted by it all! I don't usually read unfinished pieces bit I am both glad and saddened to have given this one a try and I really hope to read more on it some day. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Hugs and Merry Christmas to you!
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June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Sources say Rin
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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've read all 3 chapters and I must say that I'm really liking it so far. I'm almost scared to find out what Sesshomaru will do. At first I thought she was Kagome, but then I figured out that she was Rin.
One thing that bothered me were the your/you're, then/than, to/too errors, as well as 'accept' instead of 'except'. Personally, I really think such errors ruin a story, because I don't understand how someone who can write so well can still make such mistakes. I know most writers hate it when their mistakes get pointed out, but I'm hoping you're different. Personally, I love it when people point them out to me, because that way I can fix them.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
One thing that bothered me were the your/you're, then/than, to/too errors, as well as 'accept' instead of 'except'. Personally, I really think such errors ruin a story, because I don't understand how someone who can write so well can still make such mistakes. I know most writers hate it when their mistakes get pointed out, but I'm hoping you're different. Personally, I love it when people point them out to me, because that way I can fix them.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)