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That was amazing. Naraku is such a hottie too.

Wow. A friend sent me to read this fic and she was right. It's awesome. So hot and naughty, it's just like how I would imagine it to be under those circumstances. How I wish there was more, a sequel that told us just how much Inuyasha suffered when he found out what she did. There are a few typos here and there, but not enough to make me care, because I was far too enthralled by the action. Great job!
SunsetMiko

I just had to read it again! And I will most likely read it again many more times lol. I would love it you make a sequel to this... something along the lines of with her he no longer needed to Jewel for she make him feel loved or just a sleeping with the enemy continuance :D

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the word choices and character play you used. Rather sad its only one chapter. I would love to see more of your Naraku depiction. I have read a very large share of fan fiction and your rendition of him is only of the more entertaining I have seen. Please consider continuing in the Inuyasha fandom :)
I really don't have any criticism for the piece.

this was wonderful! fantastic! i love this story, it was hot and steamy, with a mix of pain, love and possibilities.
please add more to this! i need more of this.