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Yay! So happy for an update! And I'm totally not trying to make you feel guilty. Life (shit) happens. I'm just glad you didn't abandon this story. I keep giggling out loud at the interactions between the brothers. The way you wrote the scene with the boar and Inuyasha throwing a piece at Sesshomaru had me grinning like an idiot. So cute and well written! I've read so many creative fanfics that lose my attention because of the terrible writing. Well, yours isn't one of them. I just want to take a moment to praise your work. It's polished and even paced- not overly full of details, and you describe the setting magnificently. I haven't found a single chapter boring. These moments of character development are just as important as the plot development. And I observed that you included a really splendid moment between Inuyasha and Miroku. That was a really nice touch, and his advice to Inuyasha resonated within my own heart. I also find the way that you're portraying Kagome to very interesting. I like it. To me, you've detailed some of her best and worst qualities. She is loving, caring, and kind- but she can sometimes be extremely dense and self-absorbed. I think that your characters are marvelously in character. Sure, Sesshomaru talks more than he does in the manga/anime, and he's nicer. But the beauty of Sesshomaru's character is that he is quiet and reserved. His inner workings can be left to the imagination. I don't think that this slow reconciliation between the two is that far-fetched, especially not with the circumstances in your story. The things we experience in life lead to us becoming who we are as people. If we were to take another path, we might become something completely different. It's the same with whatever trials and circumstances you put your characters through. So if, throughout the course of your fic, the characters change a little, I don't think anyone will blame you.
Whew, sorry for such a long review! Once again, great work, and I hope to be reading more from you soon.

You wouldn't believe how excited I was when I saw an update of this story.and what an amazing story it is.you are very talented. This is easily one of my favorite stories of the moment. No other story can make me want to read the next chapter as much as this one.like seriously just drop everything and have to read the next chapter.thanks for that

I'm really enjoying your fic. Your writing is fluid and engaging, and I think you're doing a great job of keeping the characters in character. I hope that you haven't abandoned this story. I'll be checking in, and I hope to read more soon!

This story is amazing! I can't wait for more..

I just realized I've been reading this for a while and haven't commented yet. My bad. I absolutely love this story. You are keeping a great pace that keeps both of them in character, and the way you write Inuyasha is absolutely amazing. I just love how you've brought them together and are keeping them together. It's so realistic, especially with the halting progress between the two of them. With such a rocky relationship, mending it shouldn't be a smooth ride and you've done a wonderful job of keeping it natural. Love it!

Enjoyed much! More please

Poor inuyasha. He is so confused by his emotions

Sorry my review is a bit late. My laptop has really been messed up for about a week now, so I had to borrow a friends. Until my laptop gets fixed my reviews will probably be pretty late, since I can only borrow my friend's laptop when they don't need it for anything. Now that I'm finished with my little rant I will get on with my review. I have to say that I absolutely loved this chapter. I feel sorry for Sesshomaru. Inuyasha really can be such an idiot sometimes. I wonder if I could hit him hard enough in the head with a mallet if that might just knock his idiot side out ;). Why do men hate swallowing their pride to apologize when they were clearly in the wrong? My father and brother are to prideful to apologize when one of them does something wrong, yet if me or my mother does something they consider wrong were expected to immediately apologize. They both remind me so much of Inuyasha and his bull headedness. I'm sorry I went into another little rant there. I hope your doing good and that you can update real soon. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.

Awesome chapter. Ugh inuyasha still has a way to go before he can trust sesshomaru

Good story. Great plot and healthy balance between the intimate scenes. I hope Swash gets better. I also Must say, kudos on the OC. She's not too chatty, or mysteriously aware of plot you have yet to reveal. If you have a reader list, please add me to it. I anticipate your provocative update.

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