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December 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry my review is a bit late, I've been pretty busy lately. Thank you for the update it was totally awesome. I do have to say though that I wanted to smack Inuyasha upside the head most of this chapter. He was being a complete idiot. I can at least understand Sesshomaru's behavior. He's in a position of power where if you show any weakness you'll find yourself ripped apart by not only your enemies but also by your supposed allies/friends. I don't hate Inuyasha I actually find him to be a very loveable character I just think he's holding onto a grudge like a petulant child. For instance in this story Sesshomaru did treat him bad most of his life and now that Sesshomaru is trying to make up for all the wrong he did to Inuyasha in the past Inuyasha is ignoring everything he's done to try and prove that he has changed. Inuyasha annoys me even more with the fact that he does not hold a grudge against Kagome for her abuse of the collar so that she can always get her way. She treats him like he can't feel pain and I bet that if she had such a collar on any human she wouldn't repeatedly sit them into the ground like that. I've finally finished ranting about Inuyasha playing the part of the childish idiot. The next chapter should be really good. ;) Please update again as soon as you can. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.
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December 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure if it was being updated again, but I'm so happy to see it! The touch of inspiration with the antivenom both helping and being toxic was genius. ^_^ I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I actually avoided this because of the summary for a little bit, but now I regret it. This is a wonderful work of art and I'm looking forward to when it's updated
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December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome, I'm looking forward to read more
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December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Im sooo glad your files were able to be saved
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December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. Another awesome chapter. :) I knew from the beginning that Naraku would find a way to be in this story. Their going to make a very frightening and twistedly evil pair. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.
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November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel your pain just lost my computer completely about a month ago & did lose everything. Now got to wait until tax return season to get a new one. Good luck, hope they can save it. It really is a great story, I hope you'll come back to it once everything is fixed. I currently use a notebook to put ideas down & will copy it off once I get a computer. Just a thought while things are fresh you could do so as not to lose your ideas.
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November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry that my review is so late. I really loved that make out seen on the rock. ;) It is really heating up now. I really hope you can update soon. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.
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November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was so romantic and sweet. I hope for more as Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's relationship grows. Sesshoumaru is learning to love Inuyasha and hopefully Inuyasha will reciprocate those feelings. Thank you for the awesome chapter.
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this stroy so far! This has got to be the only one to start off with Sessy's death! The idea is so refreshing and Sesshoumaru is making me want to sing "If I olny had a heart" yes, I'm an Oz fan... But the story is that good! The poeple who skip this one, really don't know what they are missing!