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Im soo happy to see that you decided to continue it. I hope to read more.

thanks for thr update... cant wait for more.. hope sessinu will come to fall for each other and live happily ever after with their pups.. >.< ♥♥

I love this story and wish there were more. It is too bad it is only a oneshot. Please if you have time add to this one as this would make for an excellent story with multiple chapters.

i can't wait for another chapter!!!

i like it... hope there will be more.. love sessinu mpreg..

Awesome chapter. Hope to read more

I think your story lacks just a little in depth for each point of view. We readers would like to know how InuYasha is feeling being in heat, he is too normal you know ?
And I prefer Daiyoukai and Youkai, not yoki or other....
This is nevertheless a good beginning. Just please find a beta to correct vocabulary errors at least :(. I'm french but can recognize the wrong words. It's more dfficult to appreciate truly a story with errors I'm sorry !

Please try a second chapter, I want to see InuYasha's face and reaction !
Bonjour de la France,
A french mother

You say it's a oneshot? To bad, I'd like to know what happens next!
^___^
5/5