Hello, normally I'm not a person to write a review but I was reading your story only with a break to sleep or eat. I love your version off defeating Naraku and how things went further. I felt like the characters where straight from the original story. I'm not native english speaking but found it easy to read and to follow the story. I don't know if you have many mistakes in them but the few I noticed weren't as bad as to break the flow of reading.
I really enjoyed reading your story and wanted to thank you very much for writing and sharing it. As a person who loves to read and write myself I'm happy and a little bit envious of your writing style. Hope you write and share more of your story's in the future even if they are not related to inuyasha. You really won a new fan :)