rate_review Reviews

MORE PLEASE AND SOON THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU ARE GONNA UPDATE!

That's a t stt story! And original as well. I really enjoyed it.

could u please update i live this fic....

i love the story!

I thoght PWP was short for "plot what plot." Oh well, I guess there are lots of different ways of using it, but in the end it still means the same thing though huh. Well, keep up the goork! rk! =D

I really liked this. There were very few mistakes in grammer, and what little mistakes were there were understandable. I like the fact that you try to write properly. One of the things that I have found I can't stand in most fic is sloppy writing and bad grammer. I am quite impressed considering this is not your first language, I know that I would not be able to write as well as you did in a language other than English. Please update it! I would like to know what happens next. I like the fact that it didn't start out all happy and that they will have some obsticles to overcome.

bah, that couldn't be the end. common, Y''all have to contnue. It should be the law to me...

My thoughts on chapter 1:
"Inuyasha, you bastard!!! How dare you do that to Kagome!!"
My thoughts on chapter 2:
" *grumpily* Yeah, you should be sorry, you moron...If she goes insane or something, it's all your fault Yasha!

oh my gosh .. that was GREAT! Wonderful!
Please write more and update soon!
I really want to know what's gona happen now!

I love this story! Update soon! Please! Please! Please! Please! (yes, I am a retard) Please! Please!