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ACK!! NO!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE?!?!? write more!!! NOW!!! email me when you do...

With much love
Huggles
~Liz~

Just out of curiousity WHERE THE HELL DID YOU GET THE IDEA FOR THIS STORY!!!!!(Deep breath)'Calm down girl relax.' Sorry bout that out burst very good story very creative . Well bye then.

WHAT? how can it be done? does inuyasha take kagome back? how could she do that with sesshoumaru, and not even care what inu thinks

Very well done in first person...Have to give you that... some fic's start out in first person and quickly change back and forth they go... As for spelling, I can always over look that if i know what you mean... But I am confused a little, when did Miroku die...did i miss it or skip over it....Waaaaaaa. NOT MIROKU... Look forward to seeing more of your work..

I can't believe you're gonna tease us! I'm going to guess that Inuyasha rejects her and she livhe rhe rest of her life as a loner! Poor girl!

i really liked your story please write another!!!

A good fic marred by too many spelling errors. I counted 22 in the first chapter. Why would you want to interfere with the flow of such an otherwise well written story without typing it on a word processing program that will help you with spelling and grammar? I like what I've read, but I think you should edit your chapters for these mistakes or get a beta-reader to fix them for you (and to beta-read your new chapters before you post them). This may sound nit-picky, but on spelling/grammar I would rate this a 2 and on content an 8. That is too big a spread.

OMG, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese update soon!!!!! This is one of the best fics I have read in a long time, and I mean that. please please please continue soon!!!!!

I LOVE IT!!! Please update!!! *offers up cookies as a bribe*

update, you have to update, please, this is realy good, yep good ~_^ can't wait till chapter 4, yep ~_~