rate_review Reviews

this is a good fic please dont abandon it like some people do to there fiction stories i really would like to read more about inuyasha and kagome please right more

Aside from the typos, that apparently aff is making/creating on its own, this was so romantically perfect! Lots of elements (sadness, happiness, a bit of hentai, anger, and overall agnsty-and a tad bit of funny with Kagome falling off the bike.) and a little plot twist. Originality and appealing to the auidience. ^_^ Keep writing! I enjoyed reading it. It even made my heart tug for Kagome in the first chapter. You have a wonderful creative sense and how to put it into words. If I wasn't in need of sleep (tests! @@!) I'd read more of your work. (Soon as I finished this review and looked at what else you wrote.) I'll be sending this fic link to my friends. ^-^ Hope they review you too!

That was brilliant! I truly enjoyed this though I am sad that there are only two chapters. You should consider a sequel or something. Yay succubus! I would have never thought of that! You are imaginative to say the least!

heheh...naughty Kagome...
Very very cute~

*bangs head on table* I've read this before! But where?! Where?! Whe-kuso....*has a big dent in forehead where she had banged it on the edge of the table*

This is really a cool story and I really loved he ending. Nice idea using an incubus. I hope you have more storys up your sleeve.

cool!!!!!!!

I like it!!!!!

great fic, update ^_^ please update soon