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by kmf

person Anon
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Iyasu
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved every part of it. I was searching for a good fic to read before I went to bed, and now I can sleep peacefully, because of this. You wrote a good story, and wrote it well. I applaud you.
person mercy d
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved this small story i think its rather believable as sum nar/kag are so unrealalistic thats its painful to read. Desspite being small i think u kept everything is context i presonaly liked how u protrayed naraku (there are alot of stories which has him as a angry crazy otherly violent sex fiend)he should be calm collected sly with a fiercy temper when thougghly angered anyway i hope that u will write more naraku kag pairing as there are so few and ive always liked going against the tide so to speak so plz continue =) btw im also a new zealander living in england lol ja ne
person karma
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love n/k pairings u have to do more u rock
person BurningAngel
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats it! i loved it and everything but continue dont leave me hanging.
I hate it when people do that.
person N.S.
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, although I'm wondering if it's at all possible for you to make an actual Kagome/Naraku pairing. From what I have read so far, I think that would be another story you'd be good at making, besides that of the Inuyasha/Kagome pairing in this story. It is just an opinion of mine though.
person Nocturne22
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW... UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I cant wait for to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!
person CherryLuver2012
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the fic that turned me inot a Naraku/kagome fan! Feel proud! Even thought it probably wasn't yoru intention, too late! I found this here and had to review. And for converting me to a N/K fan, now I say thanks to you! It's because of YOU that I love Naraku! So really, thank you so much, for showing me the light to get out of the InuYasha/Kagome fics' sight.
person enid
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update pleeaasee! i am totally hooked!!
person Angel of Morpheus
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! You played well with Kagomes emotions. You can see why she would turn to Naraku. Too bad she didn't stay with him *wicked look*. I think there should be more fics like this. You know, with mucho Naraku. What is it with the 'bad boys'? Naraku... Sesshomaru.... Good job, and keep up the wonderful writting.

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