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I love your story! Too bad it had to end. The ending was very well done though adn very happy!! Well done. I hope oyu write more Sessh and Rin stories in the future

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just finished chapter 11! Read about 4 today in one sitting. BLOODY GOOD SHOW and believeable as always. Hope Rin and SEssh can stay together after the court hearing! I like the side creepy plot too.

Okay I'm on chapter 4 right now, but I'm taking so long to read to savor your AWESOME story! Its juicy, it's believeable, it's SEssh and Rin, one of my favorite pairings in the Yash verse. I like the passion you've portrayed for them, and I hope Rin's father gets dealt with! Rin's 18, that makes it all good there (bouncy)

just read chapter one. I love a/u stories! Great job so far. Good description and narration. Can't wait to get through the rest!

Okay, first let me apologize for taking so long to review. I have been reading for several days now but wanted to wait until the final chapter to give you my overall impression on the story. I love how you mande the paranormal investigation fit into the whole story. I love how you made Rin's dad overcome his grief. I love how you did everything down to the creepy feeling Rin had when watching the Sherriff on TV. I also love how you made everything come full circle in the end. But most of all I love how you used two little characters from the show to make such a big part of the story as in Ginta and Hakkaku. Fantastic work, I look forward to reading more of your exsquisite fanfiction in the future,

Your now devoted fan,

Holly

I'm very impressed. Excellent job on this story, though I have to ask, why did you decide to make this story an alternate universe IY fan fic when you could've just as easily made it a original? Don't get me wrong, I loved it, but your Sesshomaru was so out of character that basically all that remained of his original IY personality was his name! lol But, hey, you're the author and you can do whatever you want, right? Anyhoo, great lemon scenes. I love that you didn't make sex between them all rainbows and sunshine and explosive orgasms EVERY TIME. Your descriptions were real and gave your story a crediblity that most on this site don't have. Your talent for erotica is unparalled. lol I also like the twist you put in with the sheriff being the one who was raping and killing the little girls. Sick, but again, it gave the story an edge that kept me on my toes. The ghost aspect was also a nice touch.

Alrighty, I think that's all I wanted to comment on. Great job, I'll be looking for more of your stories in the future... :o)

Holy shit! This story was amazing! I don't usually enjoy alternate universe stories, but this was unbelievable! I hope you keep writing stories you are a very talented author!

-AnimeGurlie

O.M.G AWESOME!!!!!!! I FREAKING LOVED IT!!!!!! U TOTALLY KICK ASS!!!

Awesome story. I will admit that the student-teacher detail had me feeling iffy at first, but you portrayed their relationship so well that it wasn't a big deal. Great job.