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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person SwtRose
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there should be an unspoken rule ....authors can't get sick, computers can't die, and the house will stay standing in the middle of a fight (in the story) !!!! take care and be well


Rose
person DaughterofDarkness
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Over all this story was wonderful and well done the chapters were a bit short and you put massive spaces in between paragraph's to make it seem like they were longer. That is very annoying and I almost got to the point I didn't want to continue to read because of the over baring massive spaces. Interesting with the Demon lord being a humble slave and Rin being the one that wish's to set him free.
person SwtRose
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Take care of yourself.... we need your words to end this wonderful tale you have created
person snowcat
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sad to hear your so sick! Thanks for the A/N, just take it easy and concentrate on getting better. You know where you'll find us - hanging on the cliffy you left us, LOL.
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww Ras, you get better soon! Don't push yourself. lots of fluids to help flush your system, preferably clear ones like sprite n chicken broth, but I am sure you know that! the update can wait, what is important is that you get better soon. huggles n all that jazz,
dragonflyelj
person Naheta
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you get to feeling better soon Ras, just rest so you can finsh the story lol if you dont i am going to cry lol


Naheta
person Kimeko
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear you were not filling well. get better soon.
and by the why your story is a 10 with 5 stars *****.
person Rion
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ne! ^-^;; I like it so far. And I am glad I'm 300th person to reveiw!

Ja ne!
Rion
person rin-chan sesshys angel
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey ras...the ficcy can WAIT!!..... i hope you get better soon *huggles*
person Tanya
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NANI?! You left it there?! *cries* Not... fair!!! Now I have to wait!!! *sobs* Please... update... soon! I really hope that you will be able to update soon, as that was one nasty place to leave it off... especially if you want reviewers chasing after you... *looks behind self* Speaking of which... HERE THEY COME!!! *sprints ahead and hides* Ja ne!!! ^o^ Tanya

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