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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Ayama Nyoko
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must not hurt you. I am mad at you. I am tring not to find here you live and hurt you. Youw yow you are mean. UPDATE now please. I need to know what is going to happen.
person never2muchinuyasha
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have two words for this story 1. AWF***INGSOME!!!! and 2. MAGNIFICENT!!!(much kissing noises)
Just so you know I have spent the last 5 hours reading both the prelude and this story up to now.
It was a day well spent...I have been transported to another world,
I have laughed, cried, sighed (as well as been tempted to go look for a partner for a little roleplay ^_~ heh heh heh)
ok so now I will get to the point you are a truly talented author and should seriously considered being published.
I would not only pay for your book, I would take a flight to your booksigning and stand in line for your autograph.
(I live in the Bahamas so you know that is real love!!)
In fact if I wasn't a mostly hetero female I would date you, hell ask you to marry me just to be close to such a great talent!! sigh
(bad, bad, bad girl) forgive me, I digress. Ras, your writing is my new drug of choice so ...Please, Please, Please update soon!!!
person Naheta
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chap and thank goodness it wasnt to bad of a clify lol


Naheta
person Tiranth
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grr...you satisfied that desire but..Rin!!!! Oh boy...that was a great chapter...very powerful, emotional. You are a great writer Ras!
person snowcat
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
)))) BRAVO ! BRAVO (((( LUV your descriptives lots! One of your strengths. Will the Tensaiga let Sessh die? In the manga and series, Sessh could wield the Tetsusaiga with that human arm, wonder if it's the same possibility for Inuyasha to wield the Tensaiga (just my curiosity)? Anyway, it wouldn't hurt for Kagome to lay the sword on him. ^o^
person Mules
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
May have to take back the Double Whip and call you the cliffy Queeen.... he he...All cought up now and ready for more... when is the more coming.... come on must know who the creature is I think i know and can't wait to see... does she turn back into her form that she was when she cought the Dog Demom and the Son still waiting on that one..... Hello Ras you out e...e.... he he.... Great Job as always.....

Mules
person Sai Orlianna
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM


YEAH!!!! ^_^_^_^_^_^
person Silver Dracowolf
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaay! Rin's ok! *hugs author* Thanxs for letting me know when you updated. Yes! I LOVE this story!
I've read alot of Inuyasha fan fics and this is the best one out there. Of that no doubt! Keep up the good work!
Ja Ne!
person anhimals
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ff.net is being retarded again. i love the action! finally rin is d. id. i hope sess y won't die. *please don't let him die, please* update soon.
person Cassie
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Ras Captive Soul is one of the best stories besides all of Chicky's stories of course. Captive Soul is so good I have to read it over and over again along with Captured Soul. Man you leave us in suspense on the end of every chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 42. I know it will be as good as the rest. Just please don't leave me in suspense for too long. OK

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