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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person leishkychan
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok ok ok
ME wanna know more!!!!!!
plase update soon...
me wnna know what happend to sesshomar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the others
person Maria
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I loved it. Give me more please. It was awsome.
person Mules
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ras.... girly just read 38 and um what a cliffy in that one.... I am so glad I am behind.... he he... that way no waiting for me... But Killer chap... loved the ending line.... the big cliffer line... he he... Bad Ras....

Mules
person Mules
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now Ras .... Yet another cliffy on chap 39... girl ... I might have to give some shit if you keep ending them all with such big cliffy's.... Now stop that...he he..... Great Chap... Love it.... moving on... no waiting he he... better not be big cliffy in chap 41...

Mules
person rin-chan sesshys angel
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my!!! one that tis a bad place to put a cliffy, but its okies and oh my kami rin was diying...i almost started to cry again! then how sesshy saved her soul and inu helping his brother made me for get about crying and made me smile in happyness...then i got sad again cuz poor sesshy ish poisoned!!*begs like crazy* write more PPPLLLEEEAAAZZZEEE!!!!!!!
rin-chan sesshys angel (the one and only...lol)
person Evelyn
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowzerz! So much good stuff! Finally, his stupid collar is off! I had been waiting SO LONG for that!
You made me HAPPY! Can't wait for the next chappie, SO HURRY UP! lol. No just playin'. Update so Bye Bye-Bye ^_^
person comicfancat
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,great story-I know I should review between chapters but I kept going to see what was going to happen and I and the few I've showed it to think it's great.:) I thought chapter 41 was going to be it but you have me on the edge of my seat wondering whats going to happen now.Your not going to kill Sessh are you?I read Captured Soul and after every thing he's been through he should be due some happiness,don't you think.?Plus he told Kikyo he'd kill her after he was freed,he should at least hurt her some. Plus I have some ideas on another story if you let them live.After all Rin still has to meet his dad and he has to come to terms with his past and claim the throne if he wants it,dosen't he?

Had fun reading and fantisizing this story with my sister and some friends on what he should do next and
what else would happen to him now. :) Kerry aka Comicfancat
person Mija
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! Rins soul is back but dammit..poor Sesshy cant get a break..and I just knew it was the evil witch or in this case her watch dog..damn that pandora..and omg please tell me that itchy woman Kikyo is not around..will have to hunt her down and kill her myself if she touches my INU..grrrrrrrrrrrrr...lol..anyhow another great chapter Rass but dang it Im dying here all these cliffy's..sniffles..update soon please???? *gives puppy eyes*...Im a sick girl here and my only joy is reading my wonderfull favorite stories, ya want me to get better right??...*knows its shamefull and knows it did not work* sigh..please update Ras gf please??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..and btw Inu and Sesshy fighting together as family???? PRICELESSSSSSSS..:-) hugggles your fan and friend Mija..:-)
person New Fan
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It took a battle his his importance for Sesshoumaru to
finally appreciate his little brother. "Typical". As always
great chapter; it kept me intrigue from beginning to end.
I can not wait to see if Rin's true powers be reveal in upcoming
chapters. Update soon. ^__^
person youkai tsuki
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Creepy. The collar had a life. Another exceptional chapter.


youkai tsuki

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