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Wonderful storyline, great character development, hurry with more chapters, PLEASE!!! Oh, just a small correction: Sesshoumaru's sword is Tenseiga and the Tokijin (no need to add the u behind the first o) and InuYasha's sword is the Tetsusaiga. The Japanese, when pronouncing this slide over the u so you never really hear it, just a longer s sound, if that makes any sense. Even though Shippo and InuYasha are very close friends, it would still be considered an insult of the greatest proportions to be called a dog even by friends (Inu) in the Japanese culture. =) Keep up the good work!

YHEA!!!!!!! I have been waiting for this chapterfor weeks!!! lol!! TY!! AND PLEASE!.. keep updating is one of my faves and I have been telling ppl about it!!!

Hi I'm pretty new to Adultff.net so this will be my name for now (its Takisho if the name doesn't appear 0_0). I hope no one has already chosen that name so please inform me if so.
Anyway, back to the review. Hi rasberries. I've read your review on ffn and adultff.net. theres only one differnce that i noticed ( it was kinda a mixup between adult ff.net and ffn). and that was chapter 29. I enjoy reading this story very much and how you have used the theme of love to be able to express it so well. I dunno but i think I will have to copy and paste the whole story, chapter to chapter into my hard disk!!! ^_^ So please continue on with your story and I will from now ond yod your adultff.net version as not to miss anything..exciting!!

GOD!
Why does your story have to be so good?
I've seen it on this site, but I thought it was going to something totally different.
Once I started to read it, I couldn't stop.
Jeez!! Hardly any story can so that.
Man....It's sad that Sesshoumaru was a slave for so long.
And it was sweet how Inuyasha acted. Well of course, there brotheres. Hee Hee. Earth to Nekiochan.

Well keep up the good work
I can't wait to read the part when the coller/spell gets to be takin off. And when Sess and Rin get together?

Ohh..I can't wait...Again keep up the good work.

Your doing great!! ^_~

great chapter, eagerly awaiting the next!

Wonderful, wonderful story! I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read the rest!

another great chapter! Please update! Keep up the great work, and I'm glad Rin's still a virgin....can't wait for the 'ceremony' to happen!

Nice Kagome and InuYasha interaction. The Reunion with the demons had humor with the insults and the small romantic moments with Rin and Sesshomaru still make the fic worth while. Their father...I don't know what to expect from that. Please continue!

BlueSaiyanChick

WOW... Killer Chap... I am glad someone asked if she lost her virginity I was wondering... lol... anyway good chap even though it was a long wait it was well worth it... I just hope the next chap isn't as long await... inpatient fan here... I so love that o iso is gone I hope for good or Rin can kick her ass next time... and Inu (gods you got to love him) he is so sweet why won't Sess just talk to him a little male bonding might be what he needs... Brother love... I hope him and Kagome get together soon is he coming to the dinner or will we not see him again until they take off Sessy retraint... OH SO many questions... GREAT JOB!!! until next time.... MULES

yes! you finally posted. I love how the story is progressing and how are are incoporating Inuyasha in. I'm glad Inuyasha ire mre mature than in the anime. It feels so refreshing not being frustrated over him. I think I see a twinkle of romance between he and kagome. That would be interesting to see how their relationship progresses, but I do hope that you will still focus mainly on sess and rin. I've always loved that pairing, but their relationship in your story is so cute. Please update soon. I'll be waiting...