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for Take My Breath Away

by Rukhsana

person aleaha
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to have to be so demanding but you absolutly must update this fic soon...I'm afraid if you don't I might loss my fragile grip on reality I whavehave to be locked away in some local mentle institution. forever mumbling incoherently to myself. I don't think you want that on your consience.

Ok all kidding aside I don't think I've been left on a cliffhanger so bad in all my readings of inu fics...I'm so happy *see I told you I would lose my grip on reality* I love it can't wait for more
person Sei
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the description in this, as well as the realism of her reaction to seeing him nude. Even though the situation is serious...these thoughts are unstoppable. I can easily picture them together, while she is trying to lower his temperature. Nice work ^^

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