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for My Unwilling Mate

by LoriLanders

person wynter89
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was amazing, i loved it. i cant wait for more!! though you got some time items mixed up or you could not think of how to explain what a certain object looked like so you just something from the future. i find some of the items western style other that come from Japan. this is prably confusing, so i will cut this short.

this is one amazing peice of work. yes there is smelling mistakes, but who is paying attention to that. i found myeslf caught in your story web, and now i cant escape, it is too interesting for me to even try. i loved it when i read the first chapter. i cant wait for the next, i hope it will be up soon.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you
person Succura
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooooow!! ^_^ veryveryveryvery very good! Im so hooked! [plz say kouga gets her?? plz!!!?] yay for you for writing goood yay for me to get to read it! [beware the water wiggle] NO DA! thanks and plz send me your updates as i wont know where to find them other wise.
person Teania
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow your story is awsome, there is alot of spelling mistakes n the chapters, but still its awsome. Please update soon i gotta findout whats going to happen next, oh and you scared me when kagome was dying but still great story.
person SqueevilKitty
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's pretty good,but I skipped the Kik/Inu lemon because that's really not my thing. *barf*
person tiger_gurl
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shessh it been almost a year and you still haven't updated.
person Jaded_kitsune<3\'sSessychan
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You left a really nice cliff hanger...*growlz* you shouldn't do that! I'll sick my Sessy-chan plushie on you!!! lol Well anywayz please hurry and finish your story. I love it so far. I like the whole Kagome and Sesshomaru theme but I like Kogua too. Keep up the good work and please hurry!!! lol
person hazeleyegurl28
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I'm lovin the story so far. Could you update soon? I've been waiting for months for the next chapter!! Because it is such a good story. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter!!:):P
person Kydra_Chan
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0 wow, this is a great story....this is my first time reviewing and I hope that didnt sound lame...^^; I got to stop saying things like that^_^;;;
person pimptroyce
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’m going to be very honest, the first few chapters in and I thought I wouldn’t like this story but I’ve grown and love it and your style of writing. I was nearly in tears at some parts and I laughed at others. Kag/ko pairing are my favorites and I love the depth you put into them both. I really love this story so please pleaseeee update soon!
person lilred_07
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is soooo totally awesome! i am aboslutely in love with it. no joke! i just read all 19 chapters, i couldn't stop! its so addicting! i can't wait till you update!

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