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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You forgot the quotation marks for the dialogue, but other than that, it was pretty good.
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter!!! =D
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry its taking so long for chapter two
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the reviews
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good. Nice tender moment there......Please keep writing.
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE NOW NOW NOW!!!!!!!
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! Please updaten! n! Onegai!! Please!! Please!! Please!! PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!? >.< I'm begging!! Only thing I could spot was some spelling errors, and you need to space your paragraphs out a little more. That's it! Other than that, it was good. Poor Kagome, she's had a rough night and I highly doubt InuYasha's gonna help it get any calmer right? Can't wait to read chapter 2!!! Ja!! ^.~ v
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (sniffles) that made me cry..but in a good way..luv the story please update soon k?? please?? pretty please???