Sway From The Rain; Fall To The Storm | By : Surrealian Category: InuYasha > Het - Male/Female > InuYasha/Kagome Views: 34737 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I Do NOT Own Inuyasha In Any Way Shape Or Form OR Profit From This Fic. . . Sadly. But I Do, However, Own My Thoughts And Stories! Enjoy, My Stories, I Mean! Hah! :D |
A/N: So, I finally got an update in last night and since it had been a week with nothing to show but a wimpy chapter, I'mma go ahead and make it up with a quick (yet no so quick, sorry D=) follow-up. I thank everyone for the fast reviews; I thought I lost some of you. =(
Okay! Before I start writing this, I got my second suggestive review, other than I'm a moose's which I have been trying to use as best as I can. Since I am not the type of person to be overly sweet and fake, I'mma tell you exactly how I reacted. When I logged onto AFF, I saw I had a new review, so being to review-whore that I am, I quickly checked it. At first, it praised my story, for which I thank you =), but it also said the dialogue I have been using for Inuyasha is inadequate and annoying. I got angry, (I have a temper), but she did have a valid point. I'm argumentative, but I pick and choose my fights, and she won. Inuyasha's manner of speech that I have been using is from him in the Feudal Era. He speaks somewhat like, correctly put, as Gin from 'Bleach.' (I like Bleach too =3) Rough. In my head, when the dialogue plays out, that is how it sounds, but, with him going through the school system, it should be more proper. Anyway, to the compromise. I fixed his speech, however, I do still think there should be a bit of a difference in his dialogue in comparison to Kagome's or Shippou's or anyone else's (It is my story lol). I'm going to keep some 'ya's' and stuff here and there, but for the most part, it is correct. I apologize for getting angry over that, and I appreciate the criticism. Thank you. (P.S. If you want to read one of my original stories, look me up on FictionPress.com . . . My pen name is Surrealian . I should have something posted up there soon. =D I'm excited for this story. Been thinking about writing it for some time now. ) Now, without further adieu.While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
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