Test Drive | By : kougaslover Category: InuYasha > Yaoi - Male/Male > InuYasha/Sessh?maru > InuYasha/Sessh?maru Views: 31177 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2 |
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don’t own Inuyasha or any of the Inuyasha characters; they’re Rumiko Takahashi’s (lucky!) I don’t make any money; these just amuse me and take up my spare time. Please Read and Review!!! |
Hey guys welcome to chapter four of Test Drive. Fair warning there is gratuitous car nerdery in this chapter. Normal service will be resumed next chapter if it isn't your thing.
Angel- Hi, sorry to say but COA is undecided. I'm pretty dissatisfied with it as it sits and I'm not sure I want to attempt re-writing it all. Thanks for the review. Hope you all enjoy please read and review! ~~~Test Drive~~~~~~ As the GPS’ counter hit zero, Inuyasha dumped the clutch and with a shriek from the German six cylinder and a roar from the rear tires, his BMW jumped from the line. He’d gotten pole position, a white 325i with gold BBS mags, and a green, blue and red stripe across its hood and fender next to him. Behind them, eight more of the four seat convertibles, a mix of M3, 325i, and 318i were in immediate pursuit. Inuyasha watched the revs climb, the rear tires hooking up and shunting the rag-top German forward towards the road. Shoving the clutch in, his left hand grabbed the shifter, quite unnaturally, and dropped the 3-series into second gear. Letting the clutch out with plenty of throttle, he pulled a slight lead on the white Bavarian next to him, the wolf demon behind the wheel shifting almost in time with him. To Inuyasha’s surprise though, they weren’t exactly leaving the pack behind. Behind him, there was a purple 325i with white O.Z. Racing mags, behind the wolf a red M3 with black mags, both right on their tails. A dark gray 328i and a black M3 with later M3 mags, followed them. Seventh and eighth were occupied by a white 318i with black aftermarket mags and a silver 325i with silver mags and blacked out trim. Ninth and tenth, for the moment, belonged to a green 325i with BBS wheels and an M3 painted in a deep magenta color, bright alloys accentuating its dark color. Fumbling with the shifter once more, having never driven right hand drive prior, Inuyasha got the three into third as their little off-shoot road merged with the actual roadway, a winding, meandering piece of asphalt that wormed through the mountains of Monaco. Off the slip road, Inuyasha pushed it into fourth as he went left past an oncoming car, then right to overtake a car in front of him. As he did, the white BMW tucked in behind him, following him as he dipped into a right hander, the road dipping down into the apex. Keeping his foot down through the fast bend, Inuyasha stayed on the throttle as the road straightened, only to begin braking very hard for a left hairpin. Pushing the clutch in, Inuyasha pushed it out of fourth and tried to grab second as he slowed, but in his haste, and unfamiliar with shifting with his left hand, banged it against the gate into reverse. Grabbing the handbrake, Inuyasha give it a quick tug, inducing a bit of oversteer and rotating the BMW round the corner. His second attempt got the cog he was looking for, and the 325i started to accelerate, though the handbrake turn to compensate for his lack of engine braking had scrubbed off a good bit of speed. The missed gearshift had been bad as well, slowing his return onto the power, and the entire ordeal having kept him from keeping the revs up, thus reducing the ferocity with which the small convertible began to build speed once again. Thus, the white 325i and the purple 325i both slipped past, though Inuyasha managed to hold back the red M3 that had nearly caught him up. Gaining speed once more, Inuyasha ran second gear up to redline and banged it into third gear, using the modified six cylinder’s surprisingly ferocious power to stop the two ahead of him from gaining any ground. Thankfully he had time; there was about two miles of meandering asphalt before a roughly mile and a half dirt section, with another mile and a half of road to the finish. It wasn’t going to be easy though, the two cars in front of him were hauling, and the seven behind him weren’t exactly sandbagging it either. While the traffic was light, there was some traffic, which was a variable Inuyasha couldn’t rely on one way or the other. The course itself was an issue as well; the road was beautifully maintained but it was narrow in sections, and carved into the mountains, with sharp stone rock faces bordering one side for much of the course. The open edges weren’t much better; low rock ledges for guardrails, and steep, long falls awaiting if one were to go over. There were some gravel patches that bordered the road in certain places, but they weren’t common enough to rely on, and in some areas were more likely to get Inuyasha in an ambulance than around a competitor. But, such thoughts were a speck of dust in the back of the hanyou’s head as he kept his right foot down, hanging with the two convertibles ahead of him. As the road fell right and then back left, Inuyasha hugged the edges of the road, putting his car right on the apex of both corners. The other two were still ahead, following a similar line, but the ferocious modified inline six in Sesshomaru’s BMW was pulling hard, not letting them pull out any sort of a lead. The road started to rise as it went further left, a high speed sweeping corner allowing Inuyasha to keep his foot in it as he ran right up against the sheer rock on the left hand side of the road. Chasing the purple 3-series, Inuyasha kept his foot in hard, willing the tires to hang on as the 325i closed the gap slowly. “Come on damn it, slip up for me, just once.” Inuyasha talked more to himself than anyone else as the road straightened briefly, dropping down into a tight right hander ahead. Relying on the car’s excellent brakes, the hanyou tried to out brake the purple Beemer, only partially successful. He got alongside the red head in the purple convertible, but she hadn’t slowed early enough for him to get by before the turn, and she had the outside line going into the corner, which meant he couldn’t outgun her there either. Even into the corner, Inuyasha was closer to the apex but his tighter line meant he had to slow further and had to wait longer to get back on the power, meaning the purple 3-series was still ahead out of the bend, just. Another, sweeping right into sweeping left lay ahead, allowing Inuyasha to stay close though there wasn’t enough of a power gap for him to pull ahead on the more openWhile AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. 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